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My Shepherd

by John Moeller
Version: First Draft
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V1 6514

how sweet to hear the shepherds voice

I ran to him when I heard it

He called me from the gate

And wrapped me in his arms

V2 6514

How sweet to hear the shepherds voice

He’s singing over me

A song of endless love

And life eternally

C 6514

O to be so Loved

And safe in your pasture

Oh to be wanted

By you

Your rod and your staff they comfort me

Bridge 641

You’re singing over me

You love me eternally

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How sweet the shepherds voice

I ran to him when I heard it

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Added by John Moeller on February 11, 2022
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Tempo: 75
Meter: 6/8

One comment on “My Shepherd”

  1. First Draft

    • (4)
      Lyrics
    • (5)
      Melody
    • (4)
      Fitting For My Church

    You guys, this song kills me. One of those that I wish I had written on. 🙂 Way to go.
    I recommend writing a unique verse following the chorus. Continue the story of what happened after you heard his voice and ran to him.

    Pros

    • Such a sweet melody that matches the message of the lyrics. So easy to sing along with.

    Cons

    • Needs a second verse. Probably needs a bridge as well, although since it’s so sweet it could Easily just be an instrumental with some hmms and ooohs.
    • The guitar strumming that happens half way through is jarring. It’s a good idea to change things up and bring more energy, but that feel is too different so I’d recommend finding something different to play.

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